Hello Sahil, I really like the passion for tools and cars that comes through your writing. I agree having a fun and interesting job is a great goal. My son who is now 26 has always had a passion for making and fixing things. He now works as an aircraft engineer and gets to fix planes. Keep on dreaming about what you want to do. I look forward to seeing more of your writing. I wonder if you could add some more descriptive words - adjectives? Ngā mihi, Maria
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Hello Sahil,
ReplyDeleteI really like the passion for tools and cars that comes through your writing. I agree having a fun and interesting job is a great goal. My son who is now 26 has always had a passion for making and fixing things. He now works as an aircraft engineer and gets to fix planes. Keep on dreaming about what you want to do. I look forward to seeing more of your writing. I wonder if you could add some more descriptive words - adjectives?
Ngā mihi,
Maria